Eight Dollar Debt
All this for an eight dollar debt..




I guess it’s a game called survival,
everyone fought for it,
but he was dead on arrival,
the surgeons had cracked the chest
in attempt to massage a spark
or two into the guy’s heart,
they did their best,
they played their part,
but the man was lost to the dark,
a ghost stayed long enough to watch
an intern curse,
and a surgeon yell for a charge nurse
to move the dead man from the triage area,
hope caved,
it was just too much,
he couldn’t be saved,
and reality was touched,
the detective’s rule-book,
offered another outlook,
it called for a case in which,
no reliable witnesses or evidence
would be recovered,
but in his face,
a truth was discovered,
the dead man’s girlfriend
was a reliable witness at the scene,
it was a detective’s dream,
she was an eyewitness to everything,
and like a canary, she’d sing,
it was a sad situation,
so much frustration
when her eyes and the killer’s met,
he said something she’d never forget,
and it was that her boyfriend was killed
over an eight dollar debt.




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Post CommentCHIPMUNK
On May 19, 2011 at 8:58 am
good
Anuradha Ramkumar
On May 19, 2011 at 9:02 am
Killing for eight dollar debt..so sad.
yes me
On May 19, 2011 at 11:57 am
Stark reality of the cost of a life. liked it Frank cheers
payaltyagi
On May 19, 2011 at 12:09 pm
GOOD WORK
LoveDoctor
On May 19, 2011 at 3:09 pm
Judging by the dollar bills, this was probably an outstanding gambling or drug debt. It must have been so painful for her to meet face to face with the killer and hear the tragic news. Your poetry is very good because it portrays emotion to capitvate readers.
Sky25
On March 30, 2012 at 1:16 pm
wow this was good