Investigative Flaws
A crime scene so painful it brings the detectives to their knees.
The situation was grim,
the day was relatively dim,
in the wind
he thought he heard the child’s cries,
as sorrow instantly slid
down the detective’s eyes,
around him were open spaces,
he moved closer
took a few paces,
closed his eyes and he would pause,
unsolved and cold cases
came from investigative flaws,
what strangled his thoughts was death,
as it took a moment
for him to catch his breath,
dried blood and broken baby teeth
was found by a tree stump,
it was the site where the child’s
body was dumped,
the crime scene detectives made sure,
they did everything in the proper order,
losing a life so innocent and pure,
one of the officers threw up near a tree,
but they had to let the little girl’s body be,
until they had to move her,
emotions would stream,
ghosts would scream,
as they bagged her hands at the crime scene,
they carefully chronicled the exact
array of clothing,
emotions pressed,
but they noted that the child was fully dressed,
her blouse seemed to have been
improperly buttoned,
the detectives felt the stress,
the child was dead, but her ghost was depressed.
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Post Commentreal lady
On February 15, 2011 at 11:05 am
My heart almost broke into pieces with this. God save the soul of this girl.
J.Kent
On February 15, 2011 at 11:09 am
wow what the hell..this poem played out like a crime drama story– again whoa
jemialbert
On February 15, 2011 at 12:19 pm
interesting one
Sourav
On February 15, 2011 at 12:20 pm
Great poem!
yes me
On February 15, 2011 at 2:20 pm
A gruesome one Frank cheers
LoveDoctor
On February 16, 2011 at 10:12 pm
This is one of my favorite pieces because you have portrayed strong emotions and fears with detail. Dried blood and broken baby teeth… After reading that, I got a lump in my throat. nice work.
Dan Seavers
On February 25, 2012 at 11:56 am
this was another good little piece