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Eerie Stillness

Life must welcome death..

It was indeed the darkest time of the night,

all the lights faded out of sight,

you could even hear death sigh, faintly,

and death was a dark mass,

with tremendous height,

my eyes fixed on it,

and I would not have been able

to put up a fight,

I moved away

to give it some space,

but it didn’t want it that way,

so it kept pace,

I turned toward it slowly,

and it stood there,

it just stood there,

as my fear went into full gear,

I just watched it’s eerie stillness,

as if I were not even alive at all,

then a soft voice would call,

it came right out of the darkness,

I’d listen again, as the terror would hit,

I felt a longing for death so strong,

that it took all my strength to contain it,

having felt that, I knew it was wrong,

then I knew it was time,

and no matter how death takes it,

it’s never guilty of a crime,

and as far as I could see,

life had to be set free,

it could never be isolated,

I too must welcome death,

even tolerated,

right to my last breath,

I then released a quiet moan,

death replied softly,

and its voice assumed the most gentle,

sympathetic tone,

no sadness was ever shown,

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  1. sandie

    On October 19, 2011 at 2:48 pm


    sad

  2. krrymarie

    On October 19, 2011 at 3:11 pm


    Nice poem but its a sad one.

  3. girishpuri

    On October 19, 2011 at 3:25 pm


    very sad

  4. erwinkennythomas

    On October 19, 2011 at 4:55 pm


    disturbing!

  5. Rosettaartist1

    On October 19, 2011 at 5:01 pm


    indeed

  6. yes me

    On October 19, 2011 at 7:43 pm


    Almost feel it for death… liked this lots Frank, definitely the season of the dark nights for it cheers Frank

  7. FX777222999

    On October 20, 2011 at 10:35 am


    Creepy and eerie indeed.

  8. Atanacio

    On January 28, 2012 at 9:59 am


    thanks for reading guys :) Frank

  9. Atanacio

    On January 28, 2012 at 10:00 am


    thanks for reading guys :) Frank

  10. Atanacio

    On February 5, 2012 at 10:20 am


    Yes me Ill catch up to reading your work again :)

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