Comments on: Unemployment http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/ Thu, 31 May 2012 14:00:59 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Lynn Evans http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/comment-page-1/#comment-406531 Lynn Evans Fri, 03 Dec 2010 06:50:46 +0000 http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/#comment-406531 Concise and accurate. Good job. However, the flow and wording could use work. Your sentences tend to end oddly. For example: "Businesses will have reduced demand for their products because of the lower incomes that the unemployed will have." Try to eliminate your uses of "has," "had," "is," "was," "were," become," or any other be-verbs. To better explain, I would rewrite the sample sentence as so, "The unemployed's lowered incomes affect businesses due to the decrease in demand for their products." ^_^ But I found your article very interesting and informitive! Best wishes, Lynn Evans Concise and accurate. Good job. However, the flow and wording could use work. Your sentences tend to end oddly. For example: “Businesses will have reduced demand for their products because of the lower incomes that the unemployed will have.” Try to eliminate your uses of “has,” “had,” “is,” “was,” “were,” become,” or any other be-verbs. To better explain, I would rewrite the sample sentence as so, “The unemployed’s lowered incomes affect businesses due to the decrease in demand for their products.” ^_^ But I found your article very interesting and informitive!

Best wishes,

Lynn Evans

]]> By: Mrs. Heart http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/comment-page-1/#comment-138899 Mrs. Heart Mon, 20 Jul 2009 13:12:55 +0000 http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/#comment-138899 Well written and informative. Well written and informative.

]]> By: Francois Hagnere http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/comment-page-1/#comment-138897 Francois Hagnere Sat, 18 Jul 2009 07:04:28 +0000 http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/#comment-138897 Excellent article. Excellent article.

]]> By: Jogie http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/comment-page-1/#comment-138895 Jogie Wed, 15 Jul 2009 23:11:09 +0000 http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/#comment-138895 That was a very nice article in deed and you should write about financial crises also. That was a very nice article in deed and you should write about financial crises also.

]]> By: Deep Blue http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/comment-page-1/#comment-138893 Deep Blue Wed, 15 Jul 2009 22:59:48 +0000 http://socyberty.com/economics/unemployment/#comment-138893 This is a very appropriate topic for an article. I am currently suffering from structural unemployment and blogging seems worth the time. Thanks for the read. This is a very appropriate topic for an article. I am currently suffering from structural unemployment and blogging seems worth the time. Thanks for the read.

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