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Here is a suggestion that will help to keep a reader’s attention.

Most of my undergraduate students at the University of Pittsburgh were poor writers.  They took my composition class because it was a requirement.  I taught the class because it was part of the contract I signed as a graduate student to get my fellowship which allowed me to go to school for free and paid me a generous monthly stipend.  This was between 2003 to 2006.

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I had to make sure my students had an understanding of the basics of composition.  You would think that college students would have a good understanding of composition.  They don’t.  Sometimes I wondered how some of them made it into college; their writing was so poor.

So, I went over the basics with them: spelling, grammar, punctuation, formatting, conciseness and so on.  Still, their writing was missing something and it had to do with content.  They had trouble with clarity and with filling up the page.

For their writing assignments I always gave them a subject and a word length.  Often times many of them turned in papers with repetitious content.  This produced a lot of confusing papers.  They were writing to meet the word length.  The papers were boring for me to read.  How did I deal with this lack of clarity in the articles my students turned in?  I gave them a single challenge.

Every sentence had to contain a new piece of information.

The writing of my students immediately improved.  It’s a piece of advice that every writer can use.

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  1. Shamanz

    On September 21, 2009 at 2:15 am


    hmm, that’s really interesting. I’d definitely try that! I learn through experience in writing and look forward to using more techniques to improve my work.

    Thanks for sharing!

  2. SlyTresmarie

    On September 21, 2009 at 3:04 am


    thank you for such informative article.

  3. athena goodlight

    On September 21, 2009 at 5:09 am


    Very good and practical advice! It’s very simple to understand. Thanks for sharing. :)

  4. DulceCorazon

    On September 21, 2009 at 6:51 am


    Thanks for this advice. Very straight to the point reminder to all aspiring writers like me.

  5. fragile18

    On September 21, 2009 at 7:20 am


    very interesting. :)

  6. giftarist

    On September 21, 2009 at 8:06 am


    Thank you for the advice..Well written!

  7. William H. Sloan

    On September 21, 2009 at 8:23 am


    simple, but sage advice!

  8. martie

    On September 21, 2009 at 8:24 am


    Excellent article and very good advice. Perhaps, students should be taught the basics of writing before they get to college.

  9. Jane Jane

    On September 21, 2009 at 8:31 am


    nice piece of advice.=)

  10. N. Lloyd Andrews

    On September 21, 2009 at 8:35 am


    Good piece and good information. It baffles me to this day that people can get into college and still need to be taught the basics.

  11. I Have Had Enough

    On September 21, 2009 at 8:57 am


    I need all the technical help I can get, so thank you.

  12. Unofre Pili

    On September 21, 2009 at 9:31 am


    I will always remember the line. Thanks.

  13. Rana Sinha

    On September 21, 2009 at 9:40 am


    Very god and useful advice. Thanks for sharing.

  14. simplyoj

    On September 21, 2009 at 9:43 am


    thanks for the advice. :-D

  15. KitKat93

    On September 21, 2009 at 10:32 am


    very interesting artilce full of good information

  16. Melody SJAL

    On September 21, 2009 at 11:06 am


    Great advice, thanks. Will have to remember this.

  17. Lisa Clayton Williams

    On September 21, 2009 at 11:11 am


    Wonderful advice!

  18. LoveDoctor

    On September 21, 2009 at 11:38 am


    Great advice and good topic. thanks.

  19. WriteEditSeek

    On September 21, 2009 at 11:48 am


    Love the simple, easy-to-follow advice.

  20. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 12:08 pm


    mzmax100, the advice I gave my students was as simple as I could make it. I wanted to be part of the solution not part of the problem.

  21. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 12:16 pm


    SlyTresmarie, when each sentence contains a new piece of information a piece of writing has a natural sense of forward movement which helps to hold the reader’s attention.

  22. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 12:26 pm


    athena, I think if you make something complicated you’re not doing much good. Plus, if a person can’t transfer knowledge, what good does it do to have the knowledge in the first place?

  23. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 12:31 pm


    Dulce, thank you for stopping by. Writing has been a passion of mine for many years.

  24. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 12:36 pm


    Hi, Mishee: Thank you for stopping by. Writing is a great way to meet other writers.

  25. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 12:45 pm


    giftarist, helping my students to write better made me feel pretty good. Teaching was a satisfying job although I didn’t want to make it a career. I don’t have the self-discipline to be a professor.

  26. Marie Antoinette

    On September 21, 2009 at 1:00 pm


    Very good advice, thanks.

  27. Sourav

    On September 21, 2009 at 1:02 pm


    It’s a good advice. I appreciate this.

  28. Olivia Reason

    On September 21, 2009 at 1:15 pm


    The best advice is always the simplest.

  29. JoshuaD

    On September 21, 2009 at 1:30 pm


    I am always surprised by how many people have poor writing skills.

  30. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 2:19 pm


    Jack, I had never taught anything to anyone in a formal sense so my students were taught about writing and I was taught about teaching.

  31. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 2:24 pm


    martie, they are taught the basics of writing before going to college. It just doesn’t stick.

  32. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 2:31 pm


    Jane, it was probably the best advice I could give them. You can get a book and teach yourself the basics; where are you going to find, every sentence should contain a new piece of information?

  33. Emma Green

    On September 21, 2009 at 3:50 pm


    Thanks for the advice I shall be sure to use that from now on!

  34. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 4:40 pm


    Lloyd, writing seems to be one of those skills that if a person doesn’t make a commitment to keep writing well the skill is quickly lost. Good writers are people who live this commitment.

  35. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 4:47 pm


    gringoperry, hello: I’m happy any time one of my articles can provide some useful information. This article is getting a good response.

  36. Guy Hogan

    On September 21, 2009 at 4:53 pm


    Unofre, I’ve found that writing well is something that has to be worked at constantly. Luckily for me I love to write. And I love to read good writing.

  37. jacksangel

    On September 21, 2009 at 4:54 pm


    Great advice. I have been writing sense I was very young and am always looking for feedback and ways to improve my writings. Thank you very much.

  38. Uma Shankari

    On September 21, 2009 at 7:59 pm


    Great advice. Just one more advice you could add. Each sentence has to link the previous sentence to the next one.

  39. royee100

    On September 21, 2009 at 8:10 pm


    nice very helpful

  40. Iggy Sapalo

    On September 21, 2009 at 8:47 pm


    I’ll try your suggestion and keep it in mind. Thanks. Great tip.

  41. Ricky Taylor

    On September 21, 2009 at 10:33 pm


    Hi Guy,
    That was a great article. Short and to the point. An excellent example of good writing. I’m learning something new every day and hope to write as well one day. Thanks for sharing. ~ Ricky

  42. mo hoyal

    On September 21, 2009 at 10:41 pm


    I truly thought your article was very interesting and informative. I only have one question and that is: if you’re on a roll and the creativity is flowing and you write and write-won’t trying to put new information in every sentence you write-like it could become contriving-does this not interfere with the flow if you have to think about what new information can you put in each sentence? I am not trying to be challenging or to sound dumb, I just don’t know how I could possibly do this, or am I just not understanding what you said. An answer to this would be very helpful to me. Thank you for your article!

  43. gsparx

    On September 21, 2009 at 11:28 pm


    Great advice. I’ll try that in my next essay, although I do agree with mo hoyal about flow. Sounds more like a proofreading technique then something to use when you’re doing the initial draft. Keep the ideas flowing.

    G

  44. James DeVere

    On September 22, 2009 at 12:17 am


    It is fun discovering writer who you hang on each word. Thank-you for the advice, Guy. Will keep it new each line.

    Cheers, j

  45. justb3u

    On September 22, 2009 at 12:54 am


    nicely said

  46. speckledlily

    On September 22, 2009 at 3:18 am


    You have noticed it? I, also have noticed that most college students, even those who finished college, still don’t know how to compose.

  47. Penggaroo

    On September 22, 2009 at 4:50 am


    *ouch*
    I am still in college and practicing writing…
    This little piece of advice will surely help me.
    Thanks :)

  48. Antonette Ramos

    On September 22, 2009 at 9:19 am


    wow! this is very informative… well- written. . .

    :-)

  49. Guy Hogan

    On September 22, 2009 at 10:01 am


    Yes, each sentence should link to the next one. Also, the first draft is always about keeping the flow of ideas going. It’s during revision that the writer wants to make sure that each sentence contains a new piece of information.

  50. fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa

    On September 22, 2009 at 10:18 am


    That is a very interesting piece of information. If you keep your reader looking forward to the “next piece” of information (next sentence) you have caught his attention.
    It was never my intention to write, but as it turns out I find joy in reading and writing, and over time I hope to improve.

  51. jay0lynn

    On September 22, 2009 at 2:16 pm


    hmmm… I enjoyed that. I myself love to write and read. And I know I’m not good at writing but that doesn’t mean I don’t love it. I really wish I was the best writer ever!!! lol

  52. sophiemarie

    On September 22, 2009 at 6:11 pm


    that was an interesting advice, thanks :)

  53. Guy Hogan

    On September 22, 2009 at 7:40 pm


    jay, becoming a better writer is %10 inspiration and %90 perspiration. Read, study and write. All three are important.

  54. Guy Hogan

    On September 22, 2009 at 7:45 pm


    sophie, I’m glad you found the article informative.

  55. DustinTheToucan

    On September 22, 2009 at 9:08 pm


    I love the piece of advice. But I can’t go with saying to always follow it. Sometimes one needs to repeat something but in a different manner and slightly different information to get a point across.

    Just my opinion. =)

  56. Reese Skyler

    On September 23, 2009 at 2:30 am


    thanks for the wise words :]

  57. Guy Hogan

    On September 23, 2009 at 10:11 am


    Dustin, that’s very true. Sometimes something needs to be repeated but even here what is repeated can also contain something new. There is no contradiction.

  58. theSVK

    On September 23, 2009 at 11:42 am


    good :)

  59. duromus

    On September 23, 2009 at 1:33 pm


    Most excellent article! I agree’st with thou and thine assessment of America’s education, especially analysis of mine works!

  60. Kojack

    On September 23, 2009 at 2:03 pm


    I will remember that,

  61. riccardof

    On September 23, 2009 at 6:10 pm


    A very thoughtful article! I’m sure their papers improved greatly

  62. Ruby Hawk

    On September 23, 2009 at 7:03 pm


    That is very good advise and I had never heard it before. I will have to keep that bit of imformation in mind. So simple and so important.

  63. Guy Hogan

    On September 24, 2009 at 9:58 am


    I think the best advice is always easy to understand. When advice is complicated it may do more harm than good.

  64. Zunairah

    On September 27, 2009 at 5:50 am


    I believe that in order to increase the word length new piece of info should be added in each sentence otherwise the article or any essay would be boring for the teacher. Thanks for sharing :)

  65. XXElleXX

    On September 27, 2009 at 3:10 pm


    I think narrative writing is a better option for poor writers. Choosing a topic which is within your experience so that you will not have to struggle with the content is also important :-)

  66. Guy Hogan

    On September 27, 2009 at 7:52 pm


    The topic will go a long way in helping any writer to fill up the page with usefull information.

  67. mystery writter

    On September 29, 2009 at 5:51 pm


    A good article and sound advice, I was told that when I started writing again after a long absence.

  68. Guy Hogan

    On September 30, 2009 at 10:08 am


    mystery writer, it’s probably the best advice on writing that I gave to my students and I do try to take my own advice.

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