Comments on: 2058

By: ShubhamKaushal

ShubhamKaushal — Mon, 25 Oct 2010 04:02:59 +0000

This is really amazing. I totally enjoyed reading your story

By: Judy Sheldon

Judy Sheldon — Thu, 30 Oct 2008 01:10:04 +0000

You are such a fantastic story teller. Great job. I was fascinated from the start.

Take care & God bless.

By: goodselfme

goodselfme — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 19:18:22 +0000

Great post filled with many of the components that are right up my alley! Your length was perfect, imagery was superb.

By: nobert soloria bermosa

nobert soloria bermosa — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 18:00:30 +0000

very interesting story,thanks

By: PR Mace

PR Mace — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 17:34:00 +0000

I have to agree it is a captivating story. I was caught up from the first few lines. I am not so sure I would want to see the future but sometimes I would like to be a fly on the wall and met my parents when they were younger. I think that would be interesting. Just have to be careful and not change my future.

By: Joanna Maharis

Joanna Maharis — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 16:28:32 +0000

A fascinating story. It captivated me so much so, that I look forward to reading more about this character and his experiences with time travel.

Take Care,

Joanna Maharis

By: Glynis Smy

Glynis Smy — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 15:44:49 +0000

Enjoyed this, I like the picture it painted in my mind!