Comments on: Holocaust Remembrance Essay

By: Robert Pickleton

Robert Pickleton — Tue, 12 May 2009 00:29:41 +0000

cool

By: ashley

ashley — Thu, 07 May 2009 01:43:51 +0000

why do people put the holocaust over slavery i mean its like the same thing innocent people got killed behind it

By: Jill

Jill — Sun, 26 Apr 2009 18:01:02 +0000

Didn’t really read it, it’s to long but looks good.

By: shelby

shelby — Tue, 27 Jan 2009 15:51:30 +0000

nice essay

By: marie

marie — Tue, 20 Jan 2009 18:39:54 +0000

I think you did really good on your essay. I think it shows people the importance of what happen back then and why we should always remember that day. Hopefully when students do research work about the Holocaust they see this and they understand and should be glad that we didn’t have to go through that.So dont let people put you down, youe essay was really good.

By: jmo

jmo — Mon, 29 Dec 2008 19:58:26 +0000

Ya u should not of done that. However it was a pretty good essay but never open with a question that kind of middle school level writting. Also, do not use so much hypothetical situations and do not say things like we as refering to yourself however you did correct yourself by saying as a society. This was pretty well written.

By: alice

alice — Mon, 22 Dec 2008 17:45:57 +0000

i think it was dumb for you to post this on the internet. now students are going to look for ideas and your essay is out in the open. if student look to your essay for a basis, there will be 200 other essays like yours. you just lost your origionality.