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What’s The Rush

Old Father Time seems to be in such a hurry these days.

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By Jim Swettenham

(c) December 28, 2009

This is a time I greatly fear

It happens always, once a year

Sometimes I get in such a rage

At thought of turning a new page

I am content to live in the past

Would love to have those good times last

But now we hustle and scurry

Have no idea what’s the hurry

By time I go and blow my nose

Petals withered, can’t smell the rose

People shoving, people pushing

Don’t know why there’s so much rushing

Seems like only yesterday

We were alarmed with Y2K

But that was now 10 years ago

Where time went I just don’t know

Would love to make to good time last

Old Father Time waves hands too fast

And if I maybe be oh, so bold

Baby New Year will leave before she’s old

And so here I sit here frown on my face

Wrote this in a 10 minute frenzied pace

And so I’ll sit and loudly whine

Oh give me the days of Auld Lang Syne

So with these few words that kind of rhyme

I’d like to lament the passing of time

And as 2010 draws oh so near

I’d like to wish you a slower new year

 

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  1. LoveDoctor

    On December 28, 2009 at 1:03 pm


    This is excellent poetry. You are so right. People seem to be in such a hurry these days. Don’t be surprised if there are people booking their Christmas and New Year’s vacation for next year. Slower is definitely better.

    Happy New Year!

  2. mkd1788

    On December 28, 2009 at 1:19 pm


    great work friend….nicely expressed..

  3. jaysonv

    On December 28, 2009 at 2:02 pm


    great post very interesting.. i like it,, Thanks for sharing Friend..

  4. Anuradha Ramkumar

    On December 29, 2009 at 12:22 am


    Nice poem. Great work. Wishing a happy and a prosperous New Year.

  5. Dame Barbara

    On December 29, 2009 at 8:01 pm


    This was great, flowed nicely and smoothly. I really liked it a bunch!! Good Job Mr. Jimbob.

  6. PhoenixRox

    On December 30, 2009 at 2:24 am


    I want it slower too Jimbo and they don’t kind of rhyme. They rhyme perfectly. Have a great new year, for when it gets here. PS: Don’t forget me in 2010.LOL

  7. lillyrose

    On December 30, 2009 at 8:00 am


    haha… you sure are right JB, time rushes by with the blink of an eye! lovely poem!

  8. fashion girl

    On January 1, 2010 at 5:03 pm


    time rush can be intimidating :)

  9. AlmaG

    On January 2, 2010 at 10:05 pm


    People are always in a rush even when it’s not the holidays. Fantastic poem and I love the rhymes :)

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