Your Santa Claus
by Lucky old Santa.
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By Jimbob1
(c) December 17, 2010
I would love to be your Santa Claus
And have you sit upon my knee
I’d get excited, that is plain to see
It is certain you’d get a “rise” out of me!
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This is longer than a Haiku and yet I got this notice courtesy the friendly folks at Triond who really know how to spoil a good thing…
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Post CommentSexyhood03
On December 17, 2010 at 8:25 pm
cool poem jim. that happened to me but with no explanation to my article greatest hits from 1970’s part2 .
LadyElena
On December 17, 2010 at 8:45 pm
Interesting Poem. The fact that this has now been published on Socyberty proves that Triond Stuff is Automated.
…. Also, the good news is it falls in the publication category of the December Bonus – for you.
pattiann
On December 17, 2010 at 9:42 pm
I am sorry you had that problem. But like LadyElena said at least it is in the December category. You can make more money. I respect you as a writer and feel bad for you since lately you’ve been having problems with Triond. I get articles returned for all kinds of reasons, but my mom needs the money I make, so I write, therefore I am. I am also having a ball writing.
awesome11
On December 18, 2010 at 2:56 am
greatb article friends
LoveDoctor
On December 18, 2010 at 3:25 am
LOL. Poetry takes care of everything when you try to submit to other sites and it gets declined. Sorry to hear about the troubles you’ve been facing on this site lately. Our dear friend terry has problems too. When she tries to post comments, she gets several windows opening at the same time not allowing her to read or comment on anyone’s work. This happened to me last year and I had a virus on my computer costing me a fortune.
Christine Ramsay
On December 18, 2010 at 7:50 am
You do make me laugh. I think Triond have got it in for you, Jimbob. You have so many problems with them. I love your long haiku and think it was worthy of being publuished just as it was, so there, Triond.
Christine
Colleen Ranney
On December 18, 2010 at 9:18 am
I like, I agree you made me laugh here
Great improvisation on the length too. Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones Jim.
OhSugar
On December 18, 2010 at 4:04 pm
I really like the way you turned your woes into a fun project. That was smart and I like it.
albert1jemi
On December 18, 2010 at 5:54 pm
cool