I thought that concept of your article was pretty interesting, but your articles will do better if you would take a little time to edit your articles for spelling errors and grammar mistakes. Mistakes like these make it harder for readers to follow what you are saying, because of the spelling errors.

I have to watch my own errors as well, because I know that I have made a few in the past and will most likely make others in the future, but I am paying more attention to my own editing, because I know that it will attract more readers to the articles.

Good article and I hope that the advice will help you in the future.