Do You Know Gunna Too?
by Gunna spend so much time talking about what he was going to do,
that he forgot something important in making his dreams come true.
Gunna was an interesting fellow
he always had a story to tell.
When others were at a loss for words
Gunna’s words kept you under a spell.
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He had the most grandiose dreams
to obtain wealth and fame.
Others may have tried and failed
but he would succeed all the same.
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He would be thinking and planning
from day break to sun set,
and then he would elaborately explain
how it was all a sure bet.
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His ideas were flawless
and his enthusiasm sound,
but with all the best at heart
this is what I found.
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Gunna spent so much time
talking about what he was going to do,
he forgot something very important
in making his dreams come true.
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He had his thoughts in alignment
he had his words intact,
but to actually achieve success
- he needed to, act.
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On August 4, 2010 at 10:19 pm
Nice share.
wonder
On August 4, 2010 at 11:06 pm
Yes I too know them, I too plan aimlessly sometimes.
Great and amusing.
Jimmy Shilaho
On August 5, 2010 at 12:00 am
A great poem on the would be great men of today. We need to do more than just talking.
carissimi
On August 5, 2010 at 12:10 am
loved this
BriannaMorgan
On August 5, 2010 at 1:25 am
that was nice
zain0077
On August 5, 2010 at 1:35 am
Great poem
Likha
On August 5, 2010 at 2:09 am
Right on the mark.
Christine Ramsay
On August 5, 2010 at 3:33 am
This sounds like a lot of us at times. A very interesting and well written piece.
Christine
LCM Linda
On August 5, 2010 at 4:34 am
Well said. Many people fall into this trap, just talking and no action.
giftarist
On August 5, 2010 at 7:14 am
Interesting and well-penned piece, friend.
Ruby Hawk
On August 5, 2010 at 11:04 am
Oh yes, I agree, what we are gunna do and what we do are two different things.
K64FUNNY
On August 5, 2010 at 11:17 am
nice share,thnx for sharing
J M Lennox
On August 5, 2010 at 10:21 pm
Thank you for your comments friends. Spot on Ruby – thanks!
yes me
On August 8, 2010 at 5:17 pm
Excellent J.L CHEERS