Dreadful Day
Gang violence spills into the streets…
The gang violence continued,
everyone held their breath,
as a retaliation for a member’s death
took center stage,
and it would have been safer
locked in an animal’s cage,
because what lit up the sky was rage,
gangs set fire to remaining houses,
even the birds would choke,
because there was a thick pall of black smoke,
knocking everything to the ground,
and when it finally died down,
people saw what they had feared,
there city was a mere skeleton,
and through the bones,
you could hear the moans,
a few upright timbers
and sagging roofs,
that costly siege offered no proof,
insanity had much to say,
and reality would not obey,
it was a dawning of a dreadful day.
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Post CommentGuy Hogan
On May 23, 2011 at 1:49 pm
All too real and all too true.
LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye
On May 23, 2011 at 2:47 pm
You’ve painted a very vivid picture. I could visualize every scene and cool graphic to go along with it. keep up the good work frankie….
yes me
On May 23, 2011 at 3:21 pm
Sounds like the birth of a ghetto, or the death of a community liked it Frank cheers
Draggnet@ Bing
On May 26, 2011 at 4:40 pm
Explosive write very compelling