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Final Hours

A man accepting death as he lives through the final hours.

 

Accepting death

was not even something he could have dreamed,

he had the shortness of breath,

and all his memories streamed,

only his past screamed,

as he waited for the final hours,

he could touch, but he could not feel,

all his senses slowly vanishing,

his entire last day had seemed unreal,

everyone he knew visited,

but no one cried,

it was as if maybe he had actually already died,

and during the night

a dozen nurses both male and female

worked silently at their stations

with just a little light,

his emotions would melt,

and it felt,

for lack of a better term,

like purgatory,

making death a stand, very firm,

and that death was his story.

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  1. CHIPMUNK

    On May 14, 2011 at 8:37 am


    Wow!! Brilliant work

  2. UncleSammy

    On May 14, 2011 at 8:38 am


    Nice Share

  3. Baijayanti Pradhan

    On May 14, 2011 at 9:53 am


    Nice share.

  4. LoveDoctor

    On May 14, 2011 at 11:36 pm


    Death is something we all face at one time or another. Nobody cried because it was expected, however, not everyone expresses emotions the same way. No otjher choice but to accept it.

  5. Anuradha Ramkumar

    On May 15, 2011 at 12:17 am


    That was brilliant.

  6. yes me

    On May 15, 2011 at 11:10 am


    Another terrific read this one, and the imagery was great, cold, and numbing by the line cheers Frank

  7. Bobby-Kam

    On May 21, 2012 at 5:15 pm


    damn this was good

  8. Bozz25

    On May 28, 2012 at 12:13 pm


    bro this was off the hook!

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