Comments on: Media’s Influence on Teenagers

By: lizzy

lizzy — Mon, 28 Mar 2011 15:33:18 +0000

in think this will help many people so keep on writting tha it does help

By: Bob Smith

Bob Smith — Wed, 08 Dec 2010 14:27:41 +0000

poop smells weird

By: Yusuf2554

Yusuf2554 — Tue, 05 Oct 2010 06:59:32 +0000

Hey anonymous,
Thanks for pointing out my mistakes…I have just started and well not very good at Grammar, esspecialy punctuations.

By: anonymous

anonymous — Tue, 14 Sep 2010 20:02:25 +0000

You have good ideas, but my gosh, have you not looked over it to correct for grammatical errors?

Take this sentence for instance:

“Also the edit make up in soap commercials make teenswant to put make up everyday which bad for you skin.”

Next I’ll highlight the errors and make corrections

Also(,) “the edit make up” (the “perfect” edited appearances of the models) in soap commercials make(s) “teenswant” (teens want) to put (on) “make up” (make-up) every day(,) which (is) bad for “you” (their) skin.

And this is just one example. There are many others almost just as bad. Again, your ideas are great, you just need to be more careful of grammatical mistakes.

By: Yusuf2554

Yusuf2554 — Sat, 07 Aug 2010 12:40:14 +0000

Thanks for giving me comments that help me realise everything

By: jAY

jAY — Fri, 23 Apr 2010 00:05:20 +0000

YEAh YhU RiGht!!!:)

By: ellaloves

ellaloves — Mon, 19 Oct 2009 05:11:57 +0000

i agree. the media gives both positive and negative effects to teenagers. i think what’s important is knowing how to weigh all effects and knowing how to budget our time wisely.

By: clafleur

clafleur — Fri, 16 Oct 2009 23:51:05 +0000

You are correct on your points about how the media has influence on teens, but it goes much deeper in this society. I am glad you wrote about it.

By: Yusuf6899

Yusuf6899 — Fri, 16 Oct 2009 04:41:08 +0000

hi, no bad comments thanks