Ceremonial Bow
A little dark tale about a boy fighting off death…
A bit dazed,
his eyes were glazed,
it was what death caused,
as life made it’s ceremonial bow,
and the ghost paused,
then moved as if he meant to go on,
igniting the transition,
the boy had drawn himself up
into a crouched position,
his hands hugging his arms,
and in his head,
the bells went off like fire alarms,
his eyes rapidly blinking,
then a moment passed,
in which the ghost seemed to be thinking,
the boy fought off death,
with every ounce of his breath,
and the ghost thought it was too disturbing,
but life again made its final
ceremonial bow,
the ghost shrugged,
and the boy was smiling now.
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Post Commentgaby7
On March 8, 2011 at 10:59 am
A very interesting poem!
Christine Ramsay
On March 8, 2011 at 2:48 pm
A very well written poem about such a dark occurence.
Christine Ramsay
On March 8, 2011 at 3:01 pm
Sorry. That should be spelt occurrence.
real lady
On March 10, 2011 at 10:54 am
Great poem. I like it.
jemialbert
On March 13, 2011 at 8:27 am
good share
yes me
On March 20, 2011 at 1:51 pm
Well, well, well! a saved one at last Frank cheers
Like the thought of survival for some which is the case in some cases ha ha ha cheers