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Just Another Ghost Story

A father and son share a ghost story.

Outside was bitter cold,

and every night a ghost story was told,

the firewood in the fireplace would burn,

as the boy listened to every page turn,

his eyes grew large,

and there was a haunting chill in the air,

he had drawn farther and farther

back in his chair,

as his father spoke,

every word came out like smoke,

the boy’s eyes narrowed,

and his face was tense,

as the fun and the fear would grow,

he clenched his teeth,

as if he were preparing to weather a blow,

then his eyes he had covered,

as his father’s words hovered,

the fire was dancing,

then a light coalesced

and began to shimmer,

the flames popped and just looked dimmer,

the boy’s imagination was swirling,

softly entangled in the air,

his toes curling,

and his lips were blue and thin,

his fathered mused,

with his right fingers slightly

curled beneath his chin,

it was just another ghost story,

and it was so much fun,

a ghost story shared

between a father and his son.

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  1. LoveDoctor

    On September 20, 2011 at 8:01 pm


    Your work is really good. The imagery is awesome. I like the fire was dancing, toes curling and lips blue and thin. I really enjoyed this ghost story and this is definitely a good way for father and son to bond.

  2. Rosettaartist1

    On September 20, 2011 at 10:10 pm


    good. interesting

  3. pattiann

    On September 20, 2011 at 10:52 pm


    I hope this story is a memory you have about your father it is such a nce memory. Great descriptions.

  4. Ruby Hawk

    On September 21, 2011 at 7:20 pm


    Your poem reminds me of the older folks when I was growing up. I remember listening to them tell ghost stories around the fireplace on cold winter nights. It was something special. Another thing lost and gone forever.

  5. FX777222999

    On September 22, 2011 at 4:24 pm


    Your imagination lingers to the best of your ability…great piece my friend!

  6. willie wondka

    On October 6, 2011 at 12:58 pm


    nice share

  7. yes me

    On October 8, 2011 at 1:26 pm


    Frank I still have a hoot when I take my grandsons camping in the Highlands of Scotland a good night story of how the ghosts of the Roman and English invaders mixed with a few bears and wolves ha ha ha great stuff cheers Frank

  8. Atanacio

    On February 10, 2012 at 9:28 am


    thanks Yes me :)

  9. Jenny C

    On February 22, 2012 at 5:53 pm


    this was very very good

  10. Traves

    On May 25, 2012 at 9:08 am


    this was very good man

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