Who Was Parmenides?
An brief introduction to the famous Philosopher, Parmenides, written by my fourteen year-old son, Lewis.
Lewis is a home-schooler and has just started an AS-level in Philosophy. He’s also a lazy writer who rarely edits his work; English is his weakest subject. We’re currently concentrating on improving his sentence structuring and punctuation and the following is a piece he has edited and is now happy with:
Parmenides was an ancient Greek philosopher, and dedicated Priest of Apollo. He was born in Elea in the early 5th century B.C.E and was the founder of the Eleatic School of Philosophy. Parmenides descended from a very well-off family but his date of birth is unknown and very controversial, with several theories as to when he was born. Parmenides was the pupil of another Greek Philosopher named Xenophanes and in turn Parmenides had his own pupils, the most famous of whom was Zeno.
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Very little is actually known about Parmenides and his work, as all that has survived is 150 pages of a diary that was originally believed to contain more than 1000 pages. In his diary Parmenides describes his journey from darkness to light while being carried in a working chariot. In the poem Parmenides mentions his theories such as change is impossible and existence is timeless. As you can imagine people would have and still have difficulty in believing and comprehending these theories. Parmenides also had a very important argument, called the ontological argument, where Parmenides is against nothingness and is essentially denying the possibility of a void. This led to disagreement and counter arguments where people proposed the atomic theory which suggestions that everything in the universe is either a void or an atom. With his theories, Parmenides very strongly influenced Plato, one of the world’s most famous philosophers, and through Plato, he influenced most of the Western world of Philosophy.
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Post Commentmartie
On September 19, 2009 at 9:45 am
very informative. Maybe you should have your son sign up for Triond, he could improve his writing skills and earn money!
CaSundara
On September 19, 2009 at 10:00 am
Hey Martie, thanks for commenting. I have promised him I’ll pay him if he earns anything!
WriteEditSeek
On September 19, 2009 at 1:24 pm
Nice job, Lewis! People still are arguing about the questions that Parmenides explored.
Looking forward to your next article.
Kim Seabrook
On October 6, 2009 at 4:57 pm
Well written, Lewis. It is good to study philosophy. It doesn’t, and shouldn’t, tell you how to think. But it does show you the importance of ideas, how they frame everything we are and will become. When someone says this is the way, you can say no because . . . Keep up the good work, Lewis
Leonardo da Vinci E.
On January 8, 2011 at 1:54 pm
I found the structure nicely logical and you apparently did well in selecting something interesting to learn about.