How can a film about vampires and werewolves be so dull?

This is the first chapter of a book I hope to finish. I know it still needs work, but only getting positive comments instead of criticism. Anyway, its a multi-genre story that has a fantasy type setting, but with many horror elements in it.

Demons, after being trapped in their own realm for so long, have once again, slipped back into Temporia, the world they had tried to, and nearly conquered over 200 years ago before the celestials pushed them back and sealed them away. Now they are back and the world of Temporia is suffering from elemental imbalances as well as beings and creatures simply called Myth are becoming aggressive towards each other and the Norms. Can the demons be stopped and pushed back before the celestials get involved once again?

An article on the legendary creature, the vampire.

A young man is shown the gruesome side of this Earth. The monsters of our realm are all make believe to some, but then there are others…The one’s who can see. These are the one’s who defend. They keep us from paranormal harm’s way as much as they can. This is the story of one young man’s journey into the concealed mysteries of our own planet.

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Ghostly witches make men fight to the death even though that’s what they were doing in the first place, and vampires join in too.

The Liberator crew are held hostage by a giant cobweb in space.

Fantasy and Sci-Fi Rocks My World.

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After the international success achieved by the three film "Underworld", each character will now adorn the big screen again – of course they are not killed. New chapter eternal struggle between vampires and werewolves will take the title of "Underworld Awakening".