I have a possible systematic method of reading other people’s articles, writing your own articles and publishing them. I am thinking of writing a certain number of articles a day, obviously this depends on people’s work and social commitments on a daily basis. Everyone could decide on how much to do which I am sure everyone will do already.

I am thinking, for myself, to try and write and publish for example five articles a day, and also to commit to reading ten articles a day created by people who are my friends. This could possibly be increased depending on each article’s depth of content.

I possibly suggest reading your first five friends’ articles, say two articles a day, and then the following day, move onto and read two articles belonging to your next five friends, and continue to do this in this method.

In this way you are consistently reading articles from all of your friends, liking and appreciating their work, placing likes, comments and feedback etc.

You could then maintain a consistency and your friends would be safe and reassured in the knowledge of knowing that their articles are always going to be read within a certain time period. I appreciate that this would be on a more longer time scale for people who have a large number of friends, but article reading could be increased if the articles happened to be short, thus enabling you to progress further and read more, and very importantly learn and enjoy more as well.

Any feedback or constructive criticism would be appreciated, please feel free to comment. Thank you very much.

Chris Bailie.

A thesis is formed in the introduction of a paper, and can be simply described as an explanation of your position on a topic, supported by certain points. In the body of your paper following your introduction, these points should dictate the order and content of your paragraphs.

Let me give you an example.

Now remember, when choosing a position, you should avoid obvious facts that are well-known, and focus in on more controversial, obscure positions that can be supported with ample evidence. So, for example, we know that Adolf Hitler, the dictator of Nazi Germany, was soundly defeated in WWII. An interesting position to take, therefore, would be the following: “Hitler could have won WWII if he had taken three different approaches in his military policy.” What this position does is it uses a non-truth to help highlight the subtleties of the truth: that Hitler lost WWII. This position helps us better understand how and why Germany was defeated, and will be of interest to a history professor.

Following the statement of the position part of your thesis, you need to come up with points to support your position. It’s all very fine to make a statement, but we look foolish if we have nothing to back it up with. In undergraduate studies, it is expected that students will use the arguments and writings of established intellectuals to back up their position. Luckily, in this case, there are many intellectuals who have examined why Hitler’s initial success in WWII ended in such total defeat. An examination of these intellectuals, and a selection of quotes from their books and articles allows us to form the following points to back up our controversial position:

“Hitler could have won World War II if he had taken three different approaches in his military policy. First, if Hitler had not associated himself with the other imperialistic power, Japan, Germany would not have been subject to the fury of the United States following the attack on Pearl Harbour. Second, if Hitler had not invaded Soviet Russia, there would have been no Eastern Front, manned by the ‘frantic patriotism of the Soviet people.’ Third, if Hitler had allowed a stable and coherent administrative base to form directly beneath him, instead of micromanaging his generals from afar, then Nazi aggression would likely have been characterized by greater probabilities of tactical success on the battlefield.”

In the above thesis you will note that I have come up with three points to support my position. I did not come up with these points out of thin air. Rather, after much reading and research, I decided that the evidence weighed most heavily in favour of these three points. These three points in turn, support my position.

In order to get an A in university in papers of over 2000 words, it is a good idea to provide one strong counter-argument; in other words, find the weakest point in your argument and attack it for one paragraph. This shows that you are a responsible, unbiased academic, and your professor will go into hysterics of joy. Following this one self-critical paragraph, return to your own position and dismantle this counter-argument with the superior evidence of your position.

Now one last point about how your thesis should guide the outline of your paper. For example, in a 2500 word paper, I would recommend the following structure:

1 long paragraph for Introduction

2 paragraphs for first point.

2 paragraphs for second point.

2 paragraphs for third point.

1 paragraph arguing against your position (counter-argument).

1 paragraph refuting the counter-argument and affirming the evidence-based establishment of your position.

1 paragraph for the conclusion.

Arrange the quotes you gathered into three distinct piles, and start explaining your argument in the order you presented your points in the thesis.

Remember, your introduction tells us what you are going to talk about and why it is relevant and important. Your conclusion tells us what we have learned after reading your paper, and restates your points in light of our new understanding of the evidence you presented.

I have been engrossed with each subject but I wondered why a certain dread is welling up on my stomach every time during our physics class. Our teacher Ms. Rosie dela Cruz gave us a long quiz. I was unsatisfied with the results. Meanwhile, after the class Isaw our Physics teacher talking with Michael and Ester Ann (our physics duo) in low tones. I have seen them consistently almost during our free time discussing themselves as if conjuring a plan to save in the mighty name of Physics. I have been ballistic lately, gravely paranoid of the triumvirates secret sessions. I got to know! I got to know! So I devised my own observational tactics, jotting the time, place and duration of their meetings. Then finallyduring one of my detective guises, I saw them trodding the path towards the teacher’s dormitory. I followed them, I stopped dead on my tracks when I saw them operating “a cellphone-like device.” But I know better that it isn’t an ordinary cellular device. It is more than just ordinary, I deduced. “huh?! What are you doing here Ms. Balogo?” uttered Ms. Rosie. “I….I….I…” I stammered. “I’ve seen her spying us almost everyday ma’am”, added Michael. “She must be curious about what we’re up to that’s why. Why don’t we include her on our machine testing? I’m sure she won’t mind” said Ester. So they told me everything about the device. They were making a “time apparatus” but unlike the obsolete ones, theirs is more user-friendly, portable and more interactive.

When they caught me, their work was nearly finished and they only need a volunteer to test the apparatus. To my great dismay, they have chosen me. The true meaning of the word “volunteer” was been sabotage. For now I have become an automatically nominated volunteer. They’ve supplied me with all the info needed and I attentively listened a lot. But then I remembered that I’d rather used this as an advantage. Thus, the time has arrived for me to choose what era or year I want to go through. I typed the year on the LCD screen and I pressed OK. I heard a ringtone then I held the receiver on my ear. ZAP! I felt my body twitching like it was thrown into an abyss or bottomless pit. I saw series of psychedelic lights and passages that I’ve mistaken as wormholes. Then, I passed out.

I smashed on a soft-steel chair with a large desk in front of me surfeited with a pile of papers, folders and books. I noticed I was on a huge room, outside of it was reckless busy people coming to and fro pursuing a large job given to them. Upon seeing them, I felt the pain on my back. I was almost likely to faint when suddenly one young sexy lady wearing a black long sleeve and a mini-skirt smiled and greeted me. “Hi, how’s your day?” I was shocked and looked deeper on her and found myself uttering the name of Princess Ann. I never believed that was happening.

I looked at the calendar, it was the year 2021. Fifteen years after graduation. I found out that I am the manager of a big telephone company, owner of vast lands in Europe and South Africa. I was also the head of all over 20 enormous and most well known hospitals in different parts of the world equipped with all the modern medical facilities.

My secretary Princess Ann, approached me and told me that there is a client looking for me to confer her scheme of ideas about the renovation of huge land in Lost Angeles for the recreation of tourists. I told her to come in. I was horrified with what I saw. In front of me stood a slender lady carrying an attaché-case on her right hand. It was Charisse. I jumped on my chair and hugged her very tight that she was astonished by my manner. She told me that she is an authentic lawyer of an immense and most popular artist in the world. She also owns a vast resort in Honolulu. After we all set about the project she told me about our oth9er classmates. She said that Rosario, one of the most chatty and garrulous classmate I’ve ever been, entered the convent. She realized she would put herself in God’s presence after all her senseless deeds. While Princess M, owned an enormous factory of wine. She sells different types of wine from delicate to strong savor.

And then she perceived that it was almost time for her to attend a great party where all acquainted politicians and cognizance big stars are invited. “You wanna come with me?”she said. “How could I refused? We haven’t kept in touch for many years!?” So Charisse was very delighted with my decision. I was very enthusiastic when we went to a very grand hotel I have never seen in my entire life. I found myself gazing on the glimmering ornaments and the finest embellishments hanging methodically in every corners of the wall.

Suddenly, I was bewildered with amazement with the guy I saw. That hilarious guy was Hendrick. I can’t imagine him verbosely speaking on a huge crowd. I remembered him in high school, he can’t pronounced the word well. “Look at him.” Charisse said. “Do you remember him?” “yes of course! He’s the thin, black and funny man in our high school days. Who can’t forget him?”. I said.

We strolled the whole hotel when two lovely ladies pushed me away accidentally. Their win spilled on my evening gown. “We’re so sorry”, they apologized. Then one of the ladies shouted my name. “Kimberly, is that you?” It’s Liza. I was buffing with shock. Then at the same time I noticed her companion. It was Connie Rose. They were very sorry for what had happened. They told me that they were business partners in the music industry. They have so many big stars working on them. Among them were Enjay and Keith Mary. They were making concerts on the different parts of the world.

I am highly engrossed when I felt somebody slapped me on my right arm I turned to him. He was beaming and laughing hysterically at me. Connie yell his name… “Jose!”. The funny, smart and hopeless romantic guy during our time was now the governor of Chicago. No doubt Jose can be one of the most popular politicians. They moved to Chicago since he finished AB Political Science at Oxford University. He is also the author of various books in Law.

Jose let me acquainted with all the famous artists there. I was shocked. Ronald was one of the top 5 most notable painter. His works was next to Leonardo da Vinci. There came next was Jennifer, my reckl,ess, undefeatable but nice friend. She is now the glaring superstar of all time in the whole America. She was honoured because of her highly improvised “Sisa, the Great!” But take not Sisa was a name entitled to her for being a versatile actress, not insane or delirious anymore.

Then I decided to go to the place where my childhood begun. My friends and relatives were very happy seeing me. They could not believed my lucky fortune. They gave me a welcome party. While in the party, I was very exhausted maybe because of the weather and the crowd. I decided to take a walk outside. I looked at the environment when I grew up. Along the way, I saw two persons discussing something with themselves. I went near them and they faced me, I realized they’re Ester and Michael. They were dressed like scientist or something. I asked them. “What are you doing here? Come on let’s go inside”

Not a word I have heard from them. It looked very strange. They only looked at me. We haven’t met for many years but they could not say anything to me. Then they gave me a cellphone. It was very strange. “Are they giving me a cellular device? Don’t they knew that I am the owner of the most prestigious mobile company?” I muttered. Later the cellphone rings, Ring….ring…ring….”answer the phone!” Michael said. “What?” I exclaimed. “answer the phone” Ester shouted. I was very frightened with the state. I then answered the phone. “ Hello?” Then I was being twisted and thrown into a pit. I knew it. I was again thrown into a bottomless hole. I shouted and screamed. Then down from it, I smashed on the ground holding a cellphone. I felt I’m being placed into another world. I looked out the surrounding and found out that it was the school. “ Huh?!” That was the shortest word I spoke.

Then our driver called my name, “Kim, we’re going home! Then he left.  I smiled after being puzzled of what had happened.

Well, after all, in just one day, I travelled the whole world. Yes! The power of technology, the power of TIME ENGINE!

Weber

Ap Lit

7 February 2012

How to immitate an author’s style to make your own writing better:

                Everyone screamed feverishly. Blood enveloped our minds. No one trusted no one else. Alliances formed and broke like Legos. Connect, break, Connect, and again, doomed by foul-play or weakness, ourselves our enemies. Our suspicions or our naiveté always brought us down, our every attack was just and unjust, and by accepting we were in the midst of chaos came my peace. I slipped aside, avoiding blows, but I didn’t stop the chaos surrounding, watching ‘gang’ after ‘gang’ fall. Each new death spurred more rage, deadly devils dancing to murder in moon-light, their faces scrunched tight into their stiffened muscle, their cries withering down from rage, their eyes maintaining the nervous-suspicion that clouded their judgments like justice was truly blind. Off to the side I glimpsed a child punching the air and heard him screaming in fear as he knelt beside his last victim realizing it was… someone he used to know. The realization of chaos took him to but unlike myself he stood amongst the vengeful gangs realizing none of the original killers with the original reasons for war still stood, and he cried out to the others, but it was too late the police had arrived, and they shot us all, except me hiding in the alleyway.

sentence structures, certain literary elements, syllables, or number of words to add to your flow or sentence variation, use of simialir metaphor/ imagery contructs to convey an element… 

Connected theme: chaos/ blindness/ invisibility

Ways to help people earning money online.

I agree with people who think we can help them earn but only up to certain extent. As you might think that people while trying to increase their earnings keep on hoping on sites and making efforts to earn more money, have two different meanings. One- they know their job and can spare more time while exploring newer avenues. 2- They have not yet found out the ways, they can do it properly but if only you give them a little guidance and support. As for the first category that is perfectly all right as long as they can spare their time for new sites and do their bit to get some moneys our of them. However, as far as the other category is concerned they either would learn it how to do it properly or would sit idle if they will not succeed so why not help them.

I would suggest you to help such persons please. If you see any one hoping around and not finding the right way, this is your job to help him out of trouble by throwing a helping rope. That could be useful for you as well as the one who is not reaching where he could with the little help from learned members like you. I never hesitate to help any one seeking find sites, which are legit and really pay. Anyway, my problem is that I do not know any sites other than writing sites.

I can assure you that by helping this kind of category of people you are not only helping them but to yourself as well. Because chances are that, the person would join under you on some of the sites suggested by you to get your share for his earnings. If we learn to help, others who keep on hoping on different sites not finding proper sites to earn online that can prove to be one good way for both of us. They would get good sites and we in turn might get some referrals in the process. I hope I have made my point clear.

Ancient History

Report by Loiriam Jimenez

An ancient history is history from the beginning of writing to the Early Middle Ages. It took roughly five thousand years, with Cuneiform script, the oldest discovered form of connected writing, from the proto-writing period around 30th century BC. This is the beginning of history, as opposed to prehistory, according to the most historians used the definition.

The term classical antiquity is often used to refer to history in the Old World from the beginning of recorded Greek history in 776 BC (First Olympiad). This roughly occurs during the same time with the traditional date that Rome founded in 753 BC, the beginning of the history of ancient Rome, and the beginning of the archaic period in Ancient Greece.

In India used the early period of the Middle Kingdoms and in China used the Qin Dynasty that time. 

http://www.amazon.com/Dancing-Devil-other-twisted-ebook/dp/B005MXAZX2

When, at the beginning of april – SIX WEEKS AGO – I put my three e-books up as free for a week, 600+ were downloaded by the public. yet I still have only seen ONE new review on my author page.  All I asked at the time was that thosev taking advantage of the offer be good enough to post reviews of the books after reading, but there seems to be a distinct lasck of willingness to do what I asked.

I got promises from the likes of Pattiann, FlutterbyKitty and several others, yet still I wait for the comments I so desperately want to see appearing on my amazon author page, which I visit every day by logging on to - http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B006IYVA1K 

Erin Miller was the only one so far to honour her promise and post a review, so what are the rest of you doing? I know that many more more of you would be keen to buy my books – available as a small collection for around a mere $12 – offering hours of high entertainment at this ridiculously low bargain price – and you can even get them individually for much less. Here are the URLs you need to click on 

We Aim To Please March 2nd 2012 – http://www.amazon.com/WE-AIM-TO-PLEASE-ebook/dp/B007GMNVRE  56p

Eternity and more Dec 11 2011 – http://www.amazon.com/Eternity-and-more-ebook/dp/B006KXE4O4  69p

Dancing with the devil and other twisted tales  Sept 13 2011 – http://www.amazon.com/Dancing-Devil-other-twisted-ebook/dp/B005MXAZX2

For those of you without a kindle device, just go to this URL where it is explained inn detail how you can get the books anyway - http://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/feature.html/ref=kcp_ipad_mkt_lnd?docId=1000425503

As many of you will know, I now post all of my triond content on wikinut as well. this site is free to join – just log on at  - http://www.wikinut.com/in/ughfl/  - 

And you not only get loads more views for your posts ( I have over 10,000 on there since mid-April)  but you get paid extra money for them as well, though the pay rate is admittedly poorer than you get at triond. All the same, you get extra earnings and extra views, giving yourself a bigger web presence and increasing the size of your fan base, so what have you got to lose by joining in there and taking advantage?

Not only that, but as the megalith that is facebook goes public today in commercial terms, do you not think that you might like a friendlier social site which actually pays you for being a member – the more effort you put in there, the more you can earn – not only is Matesgate a great social site and very friendly, but if you open a triod account through your matesgate membership ( which is free of course) then you get 1000 credits for every single post you publish on that triond account.

Apart from that, your posts feature during the day on the rotatng sponsored links click-ons, which all who sign on there are obliged to click on every day, so your posts are guaranteed to get even more views every day. This site really is great, offering you lots of ways to promote yourseldf and your work, interesting chat with friendly people (which also earns you credits) and the chance to earn money for yourself and everyone else for just being an active member. You really do not have anything to lose, but everything to gain, by signing up and joining in at - http://www.matesgate.biz/refs?tonyleather

Finally, I want to let my latest review of one of my books have the last word. A lady author I know from another writer site at writelink - Nicola Cleasby gave my sci-fi volume a 5-star rating -  

Quote – “Science fiction is one of my favorite genres; I love it for the sheer variety of stories where absolutely anything can happen. For me, it’s also a genre which works well with the short story form. That’s certainly the case with Tony Leather’s anthology, Eternity and More.

Whether he is revealing the depths of human emotion, such as in the moving stories, Eternity and Sweet Revenge, showing us alien life forms as in Sentient Samaritans, or rewriting history as in The Cross We Bear, the author does it with flair and imagination. He shows us distant planets and futures, new races of beings, but still manages to mix the fantastical with very real human emotions. There is something for everyone in this great collection of stories” – Unquote.

http://www.amazon.com/WE-AIM-TO-PLEASE-ebook/dp/B007GMNVRE  

Knowing how good my fiction is, why are ore of you not taking advantage of the low prices and buying your copy right away?  And PLEASE get those reviews rolling in?  Thanks.

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I have reviewed two other books of Dave Cornford, and I enjoyed them immensely. This book is no different, the first part in a new series he is developing, Cornford uses his financial knowledge to weave relevant, moving tales of people from all walks of life and wallet size and tells their stories; how the financial meltdown and recession affected them, their lives, their beliefs and their families. I have read the three stories contained in this edition before, and after reading them again, I find I like them even more. I enjoy a read that is different and thought provoking, and this book fits the bill. Curl up and have a read, I dare you not to turn your thermostat down or run around the house switching off sockets after reading, to save those all important pennies. 

Rachel Dove, Kindle Book Review